this is my blue peom my howl class had to do a peom but about what ever colour you want to and this is the one I did it about blue I chows blue because it is one of my favrot colours a cupple people in ,y class did blue to I hope you like my blue peom and have a good day
Malo e lelei Myha,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Laki I am a year 8 student attending Saint Pius X Catholic school, that is a great poem using the colour blue just make sure to re-read your writing to make sure it makes sense or to make sure to check your spelling is correct and also your writing below had some spelling mistakes too.
Other than all that you did a great job!
thank you for the comment laki you are right I do have a mastack I am not to good at spelling and I woud love to nkow where you come form because I love your name and you have all most commened on ym hole class s blog and my class it very thakfol for your comments and I am so sorry if my comment has some spelling mastaks and if you reply to me back and coud you link your blog so I can have a look at your blog and see what you put on you blog and I wod like you have a look at your class blog if you have noe if you do can you all so link that in for me agean thank you for the comment and have a graet reast of your day and rember to allwase smile
DeleteHi Myha ,
ReplyDeleteI like how you set out your work , it is neat and the background is good because it suits what you are writing about.
I think if you re-check your writing to check for spelling errors , if you do then it will be more clear to read.
Good job
filpo
Deletethank you for thay yes my spelling is not the best and there is some spelling mostaks there might even be some in this commint thankyou for communting on my blog and I hope you communit on another one of my post
by myha